submitted my first review

[noneother]

And the same lady

no i seen SweetGrace , he seen Alexandra

and if it is the same lady i can understand why it was a long one for her

but he should have at least spell checked his work before posting ha

[SweetGrace]

And the same lady

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[whoseyourdaddy]

Samlad summed it up very succinctly.....Jesus wept

[Best Before]

And the same lady

Yamser was single and lived at home with his folks, noneother has mentioned on several occasions he is married to a wife!!

So it can't be the same person

Besides even Yamser as dim as he was would know you can't review under 2 different alias!!

[zoozoozoo]

Mmmmm know yamser was from same location as me in Dublin and might even be in Poland at present

[noneother]

Always start with a positive where possible. So congrats on popping your EI Reviewers Cherry! Secondly. Grammer...
"No I SAW SweetGrace, he SAW Alexandra." Punctuation! Syntax! Parsing! Vocabulary! I recommend a stint at the EI Reviewers Creative Writers Summer School...now enrolling. For course work past papers see the thread entitled 'Very Silly'

https://www.escort-ireland.com/board...480-Very-Silly

thanks , i shall reval with some thoughts and post a few funny ones , get me warmed up for my next review

[noneother]

OK she certainly floated your boat didn't she, lol! I have not seen such a gushing review here, ever. Fair enough, but brevity is the soul of wit as the Bard once said. You could have conveyed the same impression in a third or a quarter of the amount you actually wrote (how long DID it take you??). In fairness though it is sincere & wholly positive so I'm sure Sweet Grace will be delighted to have it as her first review. One thing though before I let you get back to your Very Silly course work here- Faith did not bring you together, Fate did! Also I'd make the whole review a poem, or prose, but not both. As I said at the start, less is nearly always more! (except for when you can afford to spend more time with a very hot escort girlie). Good luck.
Ps. I see she discriminates against mature FILFS like me. Her loss, lol!

It took me 20-25 mins to write to be honest , i would have been quicker but i had to close it down every now and then

[anon361]

Don't take this the wrong way, I appreciate you taking the time to write a review when so many others don't bother.

It's brilliant Grace turned out to be as charming in real life ( I may be understating that ) as she is on these boards but your review... for me is absolutely pointless, too long, too much trying to please the lady with what you are saying rather than having the next potential client in mind and just telling him or her the essentials of what he needs to know to convince them she's worth a visit.

Your review in no way does that for me, in fact I've no idea what Grace is like because when I saw your review and how long it was I just said good grief and clicked back out again without even reading one word. I did have a second look but scrolling down what looks like a poem I just couldn't and left again.

Next time, do the lady a favour, write a proper review with the client in mind and keep it short and to the point.
Ok you'll have guys saying they like it, you'll have ladies saying it's different but for the most part very few will read the whole thing in my opinion.

[dr love]

Don't take this the wrong way, I appreciate you taking the time to write a review when so many others don't bother.

It's brilliant Grace turned out to be as charming in real life ( I may be understating that ) as she is on these boards but your review... for me is absolutely pointless, too long, too much trying to please the lady with what you are saying rather than having the next potential client in mind and just telling him or her the essentials of what he needs to know to convince them she's worth a visit.

Your review in no way does that for me, in fact I've no idea what Grace is like because when I saw your review and how long it was I just said good grief and clicked back out again without even reading one word. I did have a second look but scrolling down what looks like a poem I just couldn't and left again.

Next time, do the lady a favour, write a proper review with the client in mind and keep it short and to the point.
Ok you'll have guys saying they like it, you'll have ladies saying it's different but for the most part very few will read the whole thing in my opinion.

Grumpy bollix Ya , I jest of course anon ,but good advice.: doc

[noneother]

Don't take this the wrong way, I appreciate you taking the time to write a review when so many others don't bother.

It's brilliant Grace turned out to be as charming in real life ( I may be understating that ) as she is on these boards but your review... for me is absolutely pointless, too long, too much trying to please the lady with what you are saying rather than having the next potential client in mind and just telling him or her the essentials of what he needs to know to convince them she's worth a visit.

Your review in no way does that for me, in fact I've no idea what Grace is like because when I saw your review and how long it was I just said good grief and clicked back out again without even reading one word. I did have a second look but scrolling down what looks like a poem I just couldn't and left again.

Next time, do the lady a favour, write a proper review with the client in mind and keep it short and to the point.
Ok you'll have guys saying they like it, you'll have ladies saying it's different but for the most part very few will read the whole thing in my opinion.

as i stated it was my first review

i will take note of this for the next time