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    Thumbs up January Comp

    Erotic Stories comp.

    No limit to the length but i would like to finish it on the same day that i started it and it can be as short (plzzzzzz) as wanted too.It must be fictional.No names plz unless its clean fun.

    i await anxiously,
    Westside.

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    Thumbs up Remember

    the winner gets 250 euros (approx 270 pounds or 115 kilos approx)

    horay,
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    I rode your Mother

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    Default Plagarism.......

    Quote Originally Posted by Alec Horan View Post
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    I've seen this somewhere before I'm sure if it.....................
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    Talking

    Saturday at Captain Jack's

    The sun shone into Jack's bedroom window. He laid back on his bed wondering when Emily was finally going to be round. His acceptance grew to inpatience. But then, there was a knock on the door. Jack lifted himself from the bed and rapidly scurried downstairs. Pulling open the door with such strength, he saw her. His eyes scaled her whole body. She was wearing a pair of tight denim shorts, a tight vest top and a pair of flip flops. He could not believe his luck. "Hey,Emily." "Hi Jack." "You have caught me at a bad time, i'm just about to have a cigarette." Jack explained to Emily. "That's ok." Jack lead the way through the kitchen, and out of his back door.

    Emily was all quite fanscinated with Jacks 'Abstract' themed garden. And began to stare at the fountain. But Jack had other things on his mind. As she stood there smiling at him, she could not even imagine the impure thoughts running right through his head. Smiling one last time Jack put out his cigarette, and again lead the way back into the house. Hopping upstairs they went into his computer room, which really was no shocker. Emily planted her eyes onto 'her' orange chair as, Jack took the master computer chair. "How are you?" Jack asked. "Really good, yourself?" Emily answered. "Good thanks." Jack said.

    Jack tried his best not to drool over Emily, as he saw her not as a sex ornament, but as a real human being, as Jack had always treated her this way, it came as no suprise to Emily. Emily removed her slim jacket from her upper body, revealing her arms much more. Jack turned, and too his delight he saw a flabby stomach, not a size zero wannabe. In which he told her he much adored. As Emily normally did, she made it look like she was interested in what Jack was showing her. "Oh Jenna McKay's online." Jack said. "Oh wow! You can actually pronounce her last name now?" Emily exclaimed. Jack sat there for a good 30 seconds just admiring Emily. Emily enjoyed the attention, and made the most of it. "Want to go into my room?" Jack said. "Yep, sure." Emily replied in a high tone.

    They made their way into Jack's room. Emily's eyes steamed when she saw the colour headboard. "Beige!" Jack laughed and ignored Emily's furiousness. Emily shook off the feeling of anxiety and sat comfortably on Jack's bed. Jack put the television on. And they both just sat patiently. After a few intense minutes, Jack moved closer to Emily.
    " I love you Em." "I love you too Jack." Emily answered. Jack kissed Emily softly on the cheek. Emily smiled appreciatively and looked at him. They're eyes glued to eachother's. Jack bent forward slowly, Emily moved in sync with Jack as they brushed eachothers lips with such care. Jack slowly slide his tongue in, in such a way that Emily felt the need to join in this slow motion. Then.... well that would be telling ha ha ha...

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    not a very erotic storie...but its all i could find with Jack in it... or maybe its true
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    bloody hell captain, didnt know you had that in you, you can read me a story next time, kiss kiss xxx


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    Heading out the door that night, John really didn't want to be going anywhere. It was January, it was cold, he was broke. Only because he had been begged to go for days now, and he knew he'd get no peace otherwise he'd be knocking back the last of the bottle of JD watching repeats of Top Gear.

    Approaching the club, John saw one of the lads outside having a smoke. "Hey man, hows things? You all here already?" he asked. "Yep, didn't think you were going to show, go on in, we're over behind the bar. You'll see the lads, sitting beside a group of girls. Some lookers there dude! I call the blonde" was the reply from his friend.

    John stepped in the doors, things looked pretty empty, but then it was 2 days into the new year. What did people expect. He knew this was a mistake. Heading for the bar, he paid twice the price for a JD and coke and made his way over to the lads. Glancing around, he saw the girls Jimmy had been talking about outside. Looked like a typical girly night out. All very pretty. Especially the brunette, Jimmy could have the blond anyday John laughed to himself. The girl John had been looking at glanced his way. God she was gorgeous. He could feel his cheeks heat slightly, crap he thought. She looked him straight in the face. John really really wanted to look away right now....the ground to swallow him up. While no ladies man, John wasn't bad looking, he kept himself in shape-ish and once he had a drink in him was ok at chatting to a girl, but there was something about her that seemed to throw him off. She gave him a little smile and looked back to her friends.....


    Sitting down at the table, the usual stuff got going. Football rivalaries, the stupid blue alien movie on in the cinema, and why the hell was Big Brother still on fecking TV. Finishing the last of the JD, it was time for a smoke. Gathering up all the change that the lads could spare, John wandered off to find the cigarette machine. After what seemed like an hour of putting in 20 cent coins, finally, he reached the magic number, he pressed the button, and on cue, the machine shot everything out at him. He tried again, and as he half expected, the same thing happened. He was about to give up and scab from Jimmy, when a voice said "you need a token". John looked round, and like a scene from a really corny made for TV movie, the brown haired girl stood there grinning. " it always happens me, but if you look up there, it says it on the sign". Now John really blushed. "Shit sorry, here you go ahead, I'm holding you up, John apologised, knowing that his slim slim slim hopes had pretty much gone now. The girl waved a box of cigarettes at him, "i've got mine. Ah come on, I'll shout you one". Not knowing what to say now, "cool" was the only answer he could get out. He followed after her, out the main door into the sub-zero smoking area outside.....


    "I'm Amanda, and you are?"

    "John, thanks for the smoke" Now that it was a it brighter out here, John got a decent look at the girl. She really was cute. Probably not everyones cup of tea if he was honest, but definitely his. She was about 3 or 4 inches smaller than him, with dark smoky eye makeup, making her brown eyes the centrepoint of her small face. She wasn't a supermodel, but the way the dark blue glittery dress showed off her curves, make bits of John stir that he figured would have been paralysed with the cold by now.

    "You come here often?" she giggled......"ok ok i know, i was being a smartarse. seriously though, is this place any good? I haven't been here in years"

    "well, its not the greatest, but its probably the best of a bad lot tonight. Sure, we'll see where the night takes us I suppose" John replied.

    The girl looked at John "yeah.....i suppose we will. Hopefully it involves vodka and the arms of a nice boy"

    For the next 15 minutes, the fact that it was 2 degrees outside didn't seem to matter. John and Amanda talked, laughed and flirted, chainsmoking all the way. Eventually, the call of the bar was too strong to resist, and they made they're way back in. As John walked behind Amanda, he couldn't help looking at her arse, the way the glittery material swished and swayed over it. The dress was short, not slutty short, but short enough that John could imagine being able to slide it up a little to see what that arse was really like.

    Amanda knew he was looking at her walking in front of him. She knew that he looked kinda like her ex. She knew that if she copped off with him, the girls were going to slag the shit out of her the next day, but well, he was nice, and when he smiled at her, he looked quite sexy and she loved his accent, sounded like a weird Scottish/Irish mix. She wasn't normally one for one nighters, but after a few crap dates recently, well, her urges were strong......

    The next two hours passed like all nights out do, well the good ones anyway. Drinks, laughing, girls dancing around their handbags and lads being a bit grabby. John and Amanda, while not stuck together had plenty more chats, smokes and drinks too. It was funny they both thought, even when they weren't sitting together, they caught each other looking. As the empty glasses piled up, those looks were more and more transparent. They knew what was going on, and both of them wanted it too.....


    Walking back from the toilets, John saw Amanda coming towards him. " listen.....I don't wanna sound like a slut here, but emmmmm do you wanna go?". John didn't know what to say, he hadn't even kissed her yet. He was either going to wake up in a minute, or stuff it up. "like back to your place?' he asked. "Well yeah, or mine, whichever is going to be a cheaper taxi....."she gave him that grin again. This time he felt himself grow in his jeans. This is going to happen! he thought. " well my place is just up in Ranleigh so won't cost much really" John looked at her after saying this, hoping that she would say something good, and not back out.

    "ok.....lets go"


    They kissed while waiting for a taxi.

    She tasted of lip gloss. Cherry.

    He tasted of cigarettes and coke.

    She didn't care. She wanted him. She could feel that familiar feeling in her tummy. The butterflies. She also felt a wave of relief knowing that she had shaved her legs before heading out. Jesus the shame she thought. Then she stopped thinking and just kissed him.........

    On the way back, John hoped she wasn't a freak. Beer goggles weren't going to be a factor tonight anyway, he was sober when he first saw her, thank god for that. He glanced at her sittng beside him in the car. He couldn't wait to get her out of that dress.

    In the appartment, the kissing continued on the couch. The vodka sat untouched. Amanda loved how he touched the side of her face as he kissed her. She rested her hand on his chest as they moved closer together, joined at the lips. Their tongues mingling, sliding from one mouth to another. She felt him touch her leg, it felt like her blood had heated up as it ran up her leg. She felt warm, tingly even. Her hand drifted down his body, until it stopped on the crotch of his jeans. Even through the stiff material she could feel him hard. She didn't move her hand, but she heard his breathing quicken just a little bit....

    John loved kissing her. The cherry taste had worn off, but it didn't matter. Her hand was resting on his jeans now. His groin pushed slightly up, against her touch. God that felt good. He moved his hand up along her side. She twitched. Slowly he moved around her body. Across her back, down again and up, tracing the line of her spine. Eventually, he moved across the front of her dress and gently cupped her breast. He could feel her aroused nipple through the dress...........

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    not very short, and still didn't reach the end, hardly the eroticist of erotic stories but there ya go

    you can make the ending up yourself lol

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    He could feel her aroused nipple through the dress...........and he jizzed in his pants
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    Some time last year was working the late shift in a bar and at the end of the night one of the girls in the kitchen asked for a lift home as the taxi office was closed.

    Being the gentleman I am I was happy to oblige.

    being both married we were just chatting all the way when the talk turned a bit dirty, and with a big grin on my face I jokingly said the the lift was gonna cost her a BJ,

    much to my surprise she laughed and said to show what I had and she'd think about it and started rubbing her hand up my thigh.

    Now this really took me by surprise but once again being a perfect gentleman I had to oblige and opened my pants and pulled out my(by now hard) cock and she looked at it, smiled at me and said mmmmm tasty and procceded to rub it with her hand.

    Word of warning doing this while driving down narrow country lanes is very hard and dangerous

    she then shifted herself around and moved her head down and started to suck on it, taking as much of it as she could.
    At this stage I had to find some where to stop so I could pull mu pants down fully and tilt the seat back so she could get its full length. OMG could she suck until I could finally hold on no more and exploded in her mouth. she didn't spill a drop.

    I then got her to get out of the car and sit on the bonnet where I went down and licked her now soaking pussy. When I was hard again I turned her around and slid it in as deep as it would go, her reaching around to grab my ass and pull me deeper.

    She then said that her husband never wanted to, but she always wanted it up the ass and as I myself had never done this before either I nearly came again right then.

    OMG

    Once finished we both got dressed and I brought her home

    After that we just exchanged knowing smiles at work but unfortunately were never able to get a repeat performance as the bar closed down a few weeks later, damn recession.

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