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    Default Moderators - Would this review be approved??

    The escort says, "Nothing Explicit".

    It would go along the lines of:


    "What can I say...

    This girl is the perfect combination of pure elegance, and utter filth.

    An absolutely professional experience.
    2nd time I've seen her.

    Keeps getting better and better.

    I think I fancy her, actually.

    I'm a little jealous, cause of course she's an escort and has sex with many other guys each day.

    So long as I never meet one of them, coming out of her room or something.

    If I did, I'd probably smash them, on general principle.

    You hear that, punters??

    If I catch you putting your filthy hands on Katherine - I'LL SMASH YOU!!"




    Could that potentially be approved?

    And if not, what modifications would need to be made?

    Thank you.

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    Less overweening braggadocio, for one.
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    I just wanted to highlight as well, there's an obvious comic element in that review, which is of course why I feel its approval might be questioned.

    The point of making this thread was, to check with moderators, whether that disingenuous element would be acceptable in a review, or whether I'd have to curtail that?

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    Maybe leaving out the last 3 lines would be fine.
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