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    Default Ever write a poem for someone who touched your life so much.

    There is a Queen named Irish Miss Alisha XXX
    When you see her you may think it is special effects

    As she is the most beautiful lady you will have seen
    A perfect specimen of a human being

    Dropping on your knees to the floor
    You will worship and adore

    Her perfect soft velvet feet
    A beautiful tasty treat

    But to become a lucky connoisseur
    You may have to endure

    The most excruciating pain
    So that you may gain

    A sample of pure delight
    One that will stay with you for many a night

    So to you my Queen I do say
    I promise to worship and obey

    To never falter in my devotion
    And to hold onto my emotion

    The one of total happiness you give me
    As I bow before you on my knee

    Thank you my Queen
    For satisfying my true being
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    Quote Originally Posted by slavetoyou View Post
    There is a Queen named Irish Miss Alisha XXX
    When you see her you may think it is special effects

    As she is the most beautiful lady you will have seen
    A perfect specimen of a human being

    Dropping on your knees to the floor
    You will worship and adore

    Her perfect soft velvet feet
    A beautiful tasty treat

    But to become a lucky connoisseur
    You may have to endure

    The most excruciating pain
    So that you may gain

    A sample of pure delight
    One that will stay with you for many a night

    So to you my Queen I do say
    I promise to worship and obey

    To never falter in my devotion
    And to hold onto my emotion

    The one of total happiness you give me
    As I bow before you on my knee

    Thank you my Queen
    For satisfying my true being
    Very good.

    I do write poetry when I'm very, very drunk as some of the more hard core members know.

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    Quote Originally Posted by irishdeltaforce View Post
    Very good.

    I do write poetry when I'm very, very drunk as some of the more hard core members know.

    Alcohol, the ink of geniuses……..

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    Quote Originally Posted by irishdeltaforce View Post
    Very good.

    I do write poetry when I'm very, very drunk as some of the more hard core members know.
    iv seen it
    i think it should rhyme more
    your's did'nt rhyme at all

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    Quote Originally Posted by tom sand View Post
    iv seen it
    i think it should rhyme more
    your's did'nt rhyme at all
    poetry is not about rhyming, but about feelings and emotion.
    Some people have to have the last word,
    but they don't actually want you to stop talking,
    as they like the sound of their own voices too much.



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    Quote Originally Posted by amylove69 View Post
    poetry is not about rhyming, but about feelings and emotion.
    i all ways thought it was about rhyming

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    Quote Originally Posted by tom sand View Post
    iv seen it
    i think it should rhyme more
    your's did'nt rhyme at all
    Mie rhymes
    its entitled

    "Fleas"

    Adam
    had'em

    Bollocks

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    Quote Originally Posted by bollocks View Post
    Mie rhymes
    its entitled

    "Fleas"

    Adam
    had'em

    Bollocks
    thats realy bad bollocks
    shocking bad

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    Quote Originally Posted by tom sand View Post
    i all ways thought it was about rhyming
    thats just called a ditty,, not to be confused with titty
    Last edited by amylove69; 12-06-15 at 00:56.
    Some people have to have the last word,
    but they don't actually want you to stop talking,
    as they like the sound of their own voices too much.



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    Quote Originally Posted by amylove69 View Post
    thats just called a ditty,, not to be confused with titty
    I love ditties....

    Mary Rose
    Sat on a pin
    Mary rose...

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