View Full Version : To the Sailor of her own Sea…
Quarterpoundher
03-11-08, 01:08
To sailors of this sea so rough
not known to me how deep and tough
you need to be while all the while
maintain an air of warmth and smile
What ever earned, I hope you double
at that it is, not near your trouble
to suffer fools who are but boys
and throw from cot, all of their toys
Content I am that of this place
you hold the key to which they chase
not only that, but never tire
you own the car, men only hire
To men who rent a woman’s flesh
and sate your need and care not less
it is your right in this you seek
but not to mock, those not as weak
you may have funds with which to barter
but nare have wealth of mind, no matter
Ropes of lose morals, you are bound
ignoring wrongs, of which abound
the very women, on which you fawn
at times are hurt, by of your own
Of all I said, have proved been right
a pen indeed, it has some might
fall on your sword, it is quite light
i’ve seen your souls, and they have blight
Care not it minded of their lot
they bring you joy, but you dare not
incur the ire of mice and rat
that bite their heel, and you let that
Shy if must from all these truths
unlike you, I’ll not once lose
a moments thought as all I tried
was make quite plain, while you all hide
Easy it is to knock and chide
but cowardice, I’ll not abide
my head held high and in contrast
to your small jibes, I’m sure outlast
If issue with me because I talk
it may surprise, those I vex
my tongue has paid for more then you
will ever earn to pay for sex
So if you find that looming recession
impedes upon your need for session
far cheaper to open your mouth awhile
it costs but air, some thought, and smile
Most Women here are not your equal
they are the film but you the sequel
they sell a little for fair expense
to look at you, needs recompense
My hat I take to one and all
I pray that none will ever fall
from the height I hold them high
to depths so low that some do try
I had I hoped, because of gender
captain cared for those that tender
sailing this sea if hope to last
but on this ship, all tied to mast
nare mind as know that Escorts be
strong willed enough to plow through seas
that make a man quite ill with fright
as Woman do, they just make light
My time of late was but to ease
concern of things that caused unease
happy to learn that futures main
of most are bright and none shall stain
Now that I know of least one here
who took the time to bend my ear
I thank them more then bonds can buy
now that I know, I’ll say goodbye.
big daddy 69
03-11-08, 01:52
To sailors of this sea so rough
not known to me how deep and tough
you need to be while all the while
maintain an air of warmth and smile
What ever earned, I hope you double
at that it is, not near your trouble
to suffer fools who are but boys
and throw from cot, all of their toys
Content I am that of this place
you hold the key to which they chase
not only that, but never tire
you own the car, men only hire
To men who rent a woman’s flesh
and sate your need and care not less
it is your right in this you seek
but not to mock, those not as weak
you may have funds with which to barter
but nare have wealth of mind, no matter
Ropes of lose morals, you are bound
ignoring wrongs, of which abound
the very women, on which you fawn
at times are hurt, by of your own
Of all I said, have proved been right
a pen indeed, it has some might
fall on your sword, it is quite light
i’ve seen your souls, and they have blight
Care not it minded of their lot
they bring you joy, but you dare not
incur the ire of mice and rat
that bite their heel, and you let that
Shy if must from all these truths
unlike you, I’ll not once lose
a moments thought as all I tried
was make quite plain, while you all hide
Easy it is to knock and chide
but cowardice, I’ll not abide
my head held high and in contrast
to your small jibes, I’m sure outlast
If issue with me because I talk
it may surprise, those I vex
my tongue has paid for more then you
will ever earn to pay for sex
So if you find that looming recession
impedes upon your need for session
far cheaper to open your mouth awhile
it costs but air, some thought, and smile
Most Women here are not your equal
they are the film but you the sequel
they sell a little for fair expense
to look at you, needs recompense
My hat I take to one and all
I pray that none will ever fall
from the height I hold them high
to depths so low that some do try
I had I hoped, because of gender
captain cared for those that tender
sailing this sea if hope to last
but on this ship, all tied to mast
nare mind as know that Escorts be
strong willed enough to plow through seas
that make a man quite ill with fright
as Woman do, they just make light
My time of late was but to ease
concern of things that caused unease
happy to learn that futures main
of most are bright and none shall stain
Now that I know of least one here
who took the time to bend my ear
I thank them more then bonds can buy
now that I know, I’ll say goodbye.
SERIOUSLY GIVE ME SOME OF WAT YOUR SMOKEING:eek:
To sailors of this sea so rough
not known to me how deep and tough
you need to be while all the while
maintain an air of warmth and smile
What ever earned, I hope you double
at that it is, not near your trouble
to suffer fools who are but boys
and throw from cot, all of their toys
Content I am that of this place
you hold the key to which they chase
not only that, but never tire
you own the car, men only hire
To men who rent a woman’s flesh
and sate your need and care not less
it is your right in this you seek
but not to mock, those not as weak
you may have funds with which to barter
but nare have wealth of mind, no matter
Ropes of lose morals, you are bound
ignoring wrongs, of which abound
the very women, on which you fawn
at times are hurt, by of your own
Of all I said, have proved been right
a pen indeed, it has some might
fall on your sword, it is quite light
i’ve seen your souls, and they have blight
Care not it minded of their lot
they bring you joy, but you dare not
incur the ire of mice and rat
that bite their heel, and you let that
Shy if must from all these truths
unlike you, I’ll not once lose
a moments thought as all I tried
was make quite plain, while you all hide
Easy it is to knock and chide
but cowardice, I’ll not abide
my head held high and in contrast
to your small jibes, I’m sure outlast
If issue with me because I talk
it may surprise, those I vex
my tongue has paid for more then you
will ever earn to pay for sex
So if you find that looming recession
impedes upon your need for session
far cheaper to open your mouth awhile
it costs but air, some thought, and smile
Most Women here are not your equal
they are the film but you the sequel
they sell a little for fair expense
to look at you, needs recompense
My hat I take to one and all
I pray that none will ever fall
from the height I hold them high
to depths so low that some do try
I had I hoped, because of gender
captain cared for those that tender
sailing this sea if hope to last
but on this ship, all tied to mast
nare mind as know that Escorts be
strong willed enough to plow through seas
that make a man quite ill with fright
as Woman do, they just make light
My time of late was but to ease
concern of things that caused unease
happy to learn that futures main
of most are bright and none shall stain
Now that I know of least one here
who took the time to bend my ear
I thank them more then bonds can buy
now that I know, I’ll say goodbye.
im right
your wrong
im leaving the site
see ya.
Wasnt too bad though,
Westside.
Did anybody actually read the full text? He has far too much time on his hands!!!
My compliments on your tight iambic tetrameter, but your use of Clerihew rhyming made it a smidgen too easy to read. Then again, perhaps that was the idea. Who knows? :D
Bigbadjohn
03-11-08, 10:21
To sailors of this sea so rough
not known to me how deep and tough
you need to be while all the while
maintain an air of warmth and smile
Now that I know of least one here
who took the time to bend my ear
I thank them more then bonds can buy
now that I know, I’ll say goodbye.
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Alec Horan
03-11-08, 19:10
My compliments on your tight iambic tetrameter, but your use of Clerihew rhyming made it a smidgen too easy to read. Then again, perhaps that was the idea. Who knows? :D
too bloody right - not too sure about stanza 10 though
thehighwayman
03-11-08, 22:25
I think it's a bit too long for those like Skyblue who have a short attention span. Maybe we could have a copy of the beano posted for those of who are intallectually challenged :D. God help them if they ever tried to read a 500 page book. Their eyes would never be the same again :D
I think it's a bit too long for those like Skyblue who have a short attention span. Maybe we could have a copy of the beano posted for those of who are intallectually challenged :D. God help them if they ever tried to read a 500 page book. Their eyes would never be the same again :D
Sorry Highwayman but if I fail to notice any meaningful content in the early part of a poem or a book I tend to give it a miss. Particularly when it is only the same thing said again in a different way! Would love a copy of the Beano, from your collection I suppose. I might learn how to spell intellectually in it from the Bash Street Kids.
I think it's a bit too long for those like Skyblue who have a short attention span. Maybe we could have a copy of the beano posted for those of who are intallectually challenged :D. God help them if they ever tried to read a 500 page book. Their eyes would never be the same again :D
Hands up i didnt read it all to be frank with you but it was just a tad long.
Could you please get for me Bunty or June and Schoolfriend or maybe Judy - my prefered on is of course Bunty cos you can cut the doll out at the back and then cut the clothes to go onto it.......used to love doing that with my ............ tut, tut, tut not saying who....
Heres a little ditty for you :
The boy stood on the burning deck when all but he had fled
Stupid git...............
xoxox Lizzy.........:D:D:D
thehighwayman
04-11-08, 17:16
I have a Beano and a Beezer annual from 1975 if your interested Skyblue :D I also have some Action Force,Warlord and Victor comics . Liz I'm not sure about the Bunty, I'll have to look through my sisters old collection. I think I remember her having a Jackie.
I have a Beano and a Beezer annual from 1975 if your interested Skyblue :D I also have some Action Force,Warlord and Victor comics . Liz I'm not sure about the Bunty, I'll have to look through my sisters old collection. I think I remember her having a Jackie.
WHAT ABOUT TIGER SURE MY MEMBER OF MY FAMILY USED TO READ THAT - NO I DONT WANT JACKIE .........BUNTY FOR ME SORRY I WANT IT........
MAYBE YOU COULD GET ME A COOKERY BOOK COS IM PANTS AT COOKING - THATS WHY LIFE FOR ME IS TO SHORT TO CLEAN AN OVEN - DONT THINK I EVER HAVE CLEANED MINE..........EVER............ SHOCKING ISNT IT - STILL IF YOU NEVER USE IT??
KISSES TO YOU .......... LOVE YOU AND ALEC, AND BBJ AND THE COCK AND ALL THOSE THAT WROTE TO ME AND CARLOS, SORRY YOU WERE NOT MEANT TO BE AN AFTER THOUGHT - AND OF COURSE THE BIG DADDY69........WHERE HAS HE GONE - GET ANOTHER TATT I WOULD SAY TO BEAT MY NINE........SWINE.........
XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX TOURING FOR A CLEANER..............:p:p:p:p :D
I have a Beano and a Beezer annual from 1975 if your interested Skyblue :D I also have some Action Force,Warlord and Victor comics . Liz I'm not sure about the Bunty, I'll have to look through my sisters old collection. I think I remember her having a Jackie.
Thanks for the offer. Is it one you bought your son in '75? Wasn't really into the comics....too many words! I preferred the Shoot for the pictures. Will I ever forget Trevor Francis in his tight little Birmingham shorts? :D:D:D
carlos marvado
04-11-08, 18:21
Hands up i didnt read it all to be frank with you but it was just a tad long.
Could you please get for me Bunty or June and Schoolfriend or maybe Judy - my prefered on is of course Bunty cos you can cut the doll out at the back and then cut the clothes to go onto it.......used to love doing that with my ............ tut, tut, tut not saying who....
Heres a little ditty for you :
The boy stood on the burning deck when all but he had fled
Stupid git...............
xoxox Lizzy.........:D:D:D
Lizzy, there is an adult version of Bunty you know. I come over to yours, we go through your wardrobe, and I enjoy hours of blissful pleasure dressing and undressing you. You see I didnt have a dolly as a child so I missed out on all that fun. I have a few thoughts on colour co-ordination that I'd like to try out, but as a fall back measure if all else fails, there's always the classical approach i.e. the little black number, and the littler the better. :D:D:D
Lizzy, there is an adult version of Bunty you know. I come over to yours, we go through your wardrobe, and I enjoy hours of blissful pleasure dressing and undressing you. You see I didnt have a dolly as a child so I missed out on all that fun. I have a few thoughts on colour co-ordination that I'd like to try out, but as a fall back measure if all else fails, there's always the classical approach i.e. the little black number, and the littler the better. :D:D:D
KEEP ON SAVING YOUR POCKET MONEY AND YOUR FANTASY COULD BECOME REALITY OR A NIGHTMARE, TAKE YOUR PICK.
THE TOURING TO A TOWN IN IRELAND ANY TOWN COS I DONT KNOW NORTH FROM SOUTH SO YOU CAN TELL ME ANYWHERE - APART FROM GET STUFFED OF COURSE.:p